When Disco and Bunny finished writing they hopped in the car and drove to their friends houses and put the invitations in their mail boxes. Once they delivered the last invite they started heading home. On the way they saw Gilda selling bubbles for $1 per pack. "How much money do you have Disco?" asked Bunny? "$3" said Disco. "So lets buy three bottles of bubbles then.". They stopped and asked Gilda for 3 packs and gave her the money.
Hi Maia I love the way your story is continuing with the characters having new adventures each day. I'm enjoying hearing what they are up to and I especially like the way you have included dialogue in your work.It helps make your writing even more interesting to read. I can't wait to see what further adventures are still to come!
ReplyDeletethank you Alan
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