"Lets open it said Bunny". " Ok!" said Disco. "You start from that end and I'll start from this end". "Ready, Set, Go!" said Bunny, impatiently. They opened the parcel and found that it was lots of disco supplies including a party banner, a disco ball and party poppers. "That's cool" said Bunny and Disco together. "Hey, and look in the bottom there", said Bunny, "it's a bubble blower! Shall we try the bubbles we bought from Gilda?"
The two friends poured the bubble mixture into the bubble machine and watched the bubbles fly out but as they watched, the bubbles got bigger and bigger. Soon they were as big as the friends...
Your story is very interesting. I love bubbles and wish I had a bubble machine too.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to reading the next adventure.
A bubble party!!!! Yay!
ReplyDeleteMaia, I really like the way you've included dialogue into your story writing. I'm excited to see what happens next.